Open Poetry #29 |
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At The Door |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
A knock, ever so faint upon a door of oaken hue. Numbers fading, yet still revealing a place where he resides. A creak upon a wooden slat, aged beyond the years of he who resides. A calling card, so to speak. Left countless times before as that ever so pointed but timid sound alerted his raised brows. Through the postal opening, a letter, somewhat weathered as though having traveled the corners of the earth.The flap partially sealed, keeping the mystery of that which was within. His heart skipped a beat upon the knock, another upon the squeak and fluttered anxiously at the sight of that which surely had touched him once before. Only she would send a letter in an envelope which had the aged look, half open flap. She never would wet the envelope well enough. Combined with the fragrance that had wafted across a hardwood floor, climbed the sides of a worn recliner, circled once around his quill and ink jar.....finally landing square upon his nose. Reclining backwards, savoring the morning dew.Seeing her in his mind’s eye.He falls asleep, dreaming of her as she walks slowly across the room. Until......startled again by the creak and squeak....he awakes. Looking toward the door, seeing a letter, the same as before.Except this time....it was sealed with a kiss. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Like a stroll through your mind to the one with the perfume that lights the flicker of your soul. Sweet one. I loved reading this. ![]() SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, A very nice write, enjoyed the read. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I love the many adventures of your mind.This one was tender and sweet. ![]() Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Barry, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, inagine just waiting one sunny day only to find such a beautiful handwritten treasure coming through just for you! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have such a way of captivating the moment and framing it in gold, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Loved this. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Barry, this is lovely. Patricia |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Until......startled again by the creak and squeak....he awakes. Looking toward the door, seeing a letter, the same as before.Except this time....it was sealed with a kiss Oh yes, Barry!!! I love this!!! ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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KristieSue![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Through the postal opening, a letter, somewhat weathered as though having traveled the corners of the earth.The flap partially sealed, keeping the mystery of that which was within. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I absolutely love this! "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry! You write magic! ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
His heart skipped a beat upon the knock, another upon the squeak and fluttered anxiously at the sight of that which surely had touched him once before. Wonderful feel to this Barry~ |
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