Open Poetry #29 |
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Autumn Equinox (for Serenity) |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada ![]() |
![]() Shyly, she parted her pewter skirt with weathered hands where hid the bluest of silks. So still this day, not a breeze floated her September hem or stirred pom-poms pinned on her autumnal dress. She lay there fascinated by the tiny dancing feet in disarray above marking this day in such excited joy. Then softly, A solitary, finger-painted leaf landed at her feet tickling her fancy. In her fingers it was so porcelain, so fragile, similair to her own heart. Candles flickered thanks for gifts seeming more reverent than they had ever before. Such sacred grace was spread on the alter before her. Mesmerized into slumber's arm the mother held her close on a moss-covered bed, tucked in musty, crumpled linen as she drifted to places only dreams are made of. Rubbing the day from her eyes, she swore she saw the face of her one true love up high in the heart of the harvest moon, Humbly with arms raised She thanked her Goddess this solemn autumn equinox. She was sheer beauty, pure Serenity, her raven hair feathering in a Wiccan wind. ~* Happy Autumn Equinox M'Friend *~ ~*~ ![]() We all hope for abundant harvests, but in reality many people starve each year. There’s a way to help though, if you go to this site, The Hunger Site http://www.thehungersite.com/cgi-bin/WebObjects/CTDSites, then click on the "Donate Free Food" button, each of the day's sponsors will make a donation of 1/4 cup of rice, wheat, maize or other food staple to a hungry person. You can do this once a day, and it's free. This food is distributed throughout the United Nationsl World Food Program, with projects in 80 countries. ![]() The Canuck, Sharon [This message has been edited by Nan (09-26-2003 06:32 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh, this gave me such chills... Pure pleasure. TD |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh what a georgeous write, absolutely beautiful reading...feeling every word. Thank you |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This defintetly touches the reader and the picture accentuates your words magnificently. ![]() Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Sharon, this is so sad but true, sweet friend, though I am blessed to have a wonderful autumn harvest with my family and many of us here at Passions are, what I really want is for the world to share our autumn harvest, for all those children with malnutrition and lack of a warm home to finally be fed and feel loved! (wipes tears) I went to that link and I want to contribute as best I can to this, God Bless You, you are a beautiful and golden-hearted woman that brings hugs and hope to many, now you've brought a smile to many children's faces and a heart hug to many needy families! I just know Karen will love this gorgeous painting of words as I do, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-26-2003 04:06 PM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh my, Sharon... This literally brought tears to my eyes...GOOD tears... I could SEE this as I read...and I could see HER...and I had to smile. Sharon...this, and you, are beautiful... ![]() And, Karen?...YOU are a gift, lady...love you much... ![]() When the power of love overcomes the |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sharon You are such a nice person. The world needs more like you. Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I don't know what I do to deserve such kindness...thank you Sharon. ![]() ![]() The shaddup part is the most difficult. Because it IS all about the harvest! But thank you Sharon for honoring me with such a beautiful work that honors one of my FAVORITE holidays--and I am humbled that in that generous manner that you have, you've linked it to such a wonderful cause. I love ya, ya crazy canuck! ![]() blush. *sniff* |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I've got to agree with Eric...and the poem is wonderful! ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, You are quite a lady, bless you. ![]() |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I wish I had written this for Serenity... but since I didn't, I'm extremely glad you did... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
~nmaste~ |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I just wish I had Serenity! ![]() ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is simply beautiful!! I love the flow of it. And your imagery is perfect...it's one of your best Sharon! ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am so delighted you enjoyed this particular poem for Karen, as she is a very special lady in these forums, and out. Always giving of her wonderful humor, and fantastic poetry. Between you and I it was hard to take longer than 1/2 hour to do a poem, but I did this time n order ot try to sqeak out an image for our resident Wiccan wonder. ![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by Mysteria (09-26-2003 08:12 PM).] |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sharon, this is beautiful...just as you are... and just as our SereneOne is, too. I love you both, Sharon and Karen ![]() ![]() Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-26-2003 08:50 PM).] |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ethel you are so sweet in your replies, and I will thank you for both Serenity and myself (bet she is out - it's TGIF day!) |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Tis a beauty Sharon, truly! And a wonderful gift! Lub ya witch! ~yeti |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
eeSharon, this is simply stunning and the imagery masterful. one of your best. Truly a beautiful gift for a beautiful lady from a beautiful lady. Maree ![]() p.s keeping it. ![]() fate is not just |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sharon you are a friend , a sweet lady and most of all a treasure , reading this was a beautiful pleasure Hope |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This is quite stunning Sharon...your imagery is supberb ... and your inspire?...well shes me girlie. ![]() ![]() Thank you for this link as well...its now bookmarked and I will click away each day... feeding the hungry people and horses and kittens. ![]() Such a generous post...but then it is you!! ![]() "If you feel heartbreak, distant thunder, lightning, earthquakes ... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sharon, what a beautiful soul you are this is the most beautiful piece I have read in a long time and for a beautiful woman, as well Bless the both of you and that site *smile* I go there all the time What an angel . . . truly xxoo |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is so aptly written for one who humbly accknowledges your beautiful tribute by associating her name to the cause of charity and not to the beauty of herself. Serenity, my dear, you are truly deserving of this gracious and lovely verse which is a refection of your spiritual countenace. Our soul sister, turned master poetess, has written a true beauty, and I courtsy to you both, passionate sisters of poetry. Love and hugs to two lovely ladies Liz |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I am sure glad I wrote this for the Serene One, and equally glad that I caused some of you to enjoy it. Hope you clicked on the link to send that rice somewhere in the world ![]() |
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