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To Look Inside The Soul (posted at littlewing's request)
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To Look Inside The Soul (posted at littlewing's request) |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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Inside you in the shining, in the core that never sleeps, there is truth and acceptance for all that you can choose, all that you have done; it is the part of you which knows, it is time as a constant not as a linear progression, it fuels the want of you the yearning to connect with the equals of itself inside the souls of others; it has no age, no gender no ethnicity, it flows from life to life and provides the continuity that becomes you every time. ©2003 by icebox |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I read this in Sue's poem, icebox...as always, your knowlege of the things that are deep within, amazes me. I'm glad you posted it. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
icey? you have made me a happy woman For this . . . I thank you truly *smile* I am grateful . . . You saw right into me there xxoo |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Iceman, this is so warm and tender....as if you really did look right down into the soul, and wrote about it. You have an amazing talent, Sir.  Hugs  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-21-2003 02:42 PM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"the yearning to connect with the equals of itself inside the souls of others; it has no age, no gender no ethnicity, it flows from life to life" Yes! That is what I am eternally grateful for. You nailed this! Susan |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
publish and send me an autographed copy grins |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
You tell it like it is, Icebox. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is most precious and you couldn't be any more right! The spirit never ages, and has no limitations, and hat is why it is essential to look deep into our hearts because we are young forever and we must set our spirits free to really live! (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I'm adding this to my library, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Truth spoken by a wise man. Such is our soul, just as you have said. Thanx.. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
thoughts expressed well,,, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
breathing this beauty . . . |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Very very nice. I couldn't find a meter or rhyme pattern, but the words were still musical. It's a rare gift to be able to do that. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
It seems I read this in Susies' thread. Glad she asked for it to stand alone as well. Brotherbox, we see in similar colors... Ed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A write to brighten my day! Life & Light spring eternal!  Love & the Eternal Flame, EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this fits her to the T and then some...very lovely...and dedication. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You've captured the sightof her soul completly.  Crystal |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ah yes...I remember seeing this in Sue's thread too. Glad I found it here on it's own. So beautifully said, my icey friend... When the power of love overcomes the |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Martie ~ I am glad you are my friend. Thank you for stopping by to read. littlewing ~ At your wish, Ma'am, and by your leave. I am honored that you asked. garysgirl ~ *smile* Looking into the soul is more easily done than being at the center looking out at all the world and feeling how much pain we create every day. Thank you for stopping by and for telling me. Susan Caldwell ~ *smile* You and I share a quality; we don't let many see the real light. Thank you for reading and for taking time to comment. Aenimal ~ *laugh* OK, after I win a lottery I'll publish us both. Honeybunch ~ Helen, my friend, if I learned that anywhere I learned it from you. Thanks for stopping by.Mistletoe Angel ~ *smile* Your enthusiasm always overwhelms me. Thank you for reading and for taking time to comment. Magnus ~ Thank you Sir, it was a hard lesson. QjQ ~ Thank you Sir, always good to hear from you. littlewing ~ you know the drill: become the breath that fills you.Eromyna ~ Thank you for taking time to look at this in detail. I wrote it without thinking. There is meter but it exists in its own changes; there is rhyme but it is beyond normal conversational link. If I had written it intentionally, or re-written it to post here these things could have been strengthened. Sue's request was simple, so I honored it that way. Thank you again for giving this thought and for telling me. wranx ~ Yeah, things are tough when I have to plagiarize myself. *laugh* Thanks for reading and for telling me. Earth Angel ~ It is true, some things are eternal. Glad I could help your day. Thanks for telling me. LeeJ ~ Yes, she is a nice person. Thank you for reading this and for telling me. angelblueyes ~ The soul in general is so bright that we become blind to it. Close your eyes and say hello.  vlraynes ~ I am glad you stopped by to read. Thank you for saying hello! |
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