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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-09-26 07:37 AM


As child
I know
had I the most eccentric imagination
play for hours
she said
the way children never do

these days.

These days I still do

did I imagine then

you?

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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1 posted 2003-09-26 08:20 AM


(smiling) would you have imagined him to end the way it did, had you been imagining only?



Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-09-26 08:32 AM



Gemma...it's a

Kahlil
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3 posted 2003-09-26 08:34 AM


...the memories of a living-in-the-moment woman...  ~K~
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4 posted 2003-09-26 08:36 AM


once again,


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5 posted 2003-09-26 08:39 AM


gemjop
To this I can only add my well done.

LeeJ
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6 posted 2003-09-26 12:21 PM


lovely gem, this is a keeper, and apparently so is he....smiles and hugs.
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7 posted 2003-09-26 05:55 PM


Gemma~
There are times you are so me~
*Huglets*
~*Me*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

angelblueyes
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8 posted 2003-09-26 06:13 PM


This is great and I'm keeping it. I have a son with the same imagination and I think it makes him a wonderful person as you.
Crystal

dingusjr
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9 posted 2003-09-26 06:16 PM


Very well put.....thanks for the insight!
Larry

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10 posted 2003-09-26 08:10 PM


You may rest assured he is NOT a fig of your imagination.


Unless of course he's a Passions poet. Then all bets are off!



~~J

Aenimal
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11 posted 2003-09-26 09:57 PM


Oh this is bloody brilliant! My favourite hands down..

Miss Hoover, my worm crawled into my mouth then I ated it. Can I have another?

There are no more. Just put your head down and go to sleep Ralph

Oh boy sleep! That's where I'm a viking!

~Ralph Wiggum

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12 posted 2003-09-26 10:28 PM






(giggles in delight over Aenimal's comment) That's my sandbox, I'm not allowed to go to the deep end! (kiss on cheek) Awwwwwwwww, I believe a child's imagination is the most precious thing and I try my best to live with it each day, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

garysgirl
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13 posted 2003-09-26 10:36 PM


No, Gemma. He wasn't your imagination...
it wouldn't hurt so bad then.
Hugs to you, my friend.  
Ethel Mae

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14 posted 2003-11-14 12:57 PM


glad I went back...I would have missed this
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15 posted 2003-11-14 04:37 PM


nice read
Sunshine
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16 posted 2003-11-14 04:46 PM


Oh yes!  Give a child an imagination, and life is never dull.  It is difficult, however, to bring to life all that is in one's imagination, but we dreamers...just keep on dreaming....

Gem, I liked this very much!  You can tell because I responded twice!  LOL...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-14-2003 04:47 PM).]

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