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Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-11-13 11:09 AM

Wake up dreamer, to morning tide
another season has passed you by
See how the light slows
its yellowed shadows fade to white
Dying waves of passion like
stranded memories have no place to hide
washed up like broken shells
passed over till buried deep
return again, a sea of dreams
to sleep

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-11-13 11:11 AM

Beautiful verse Robert!
Very much enjoyed the feeling and flow.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-11-13 11:16 AM

Robert,
Enjoyed the read.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2003-11-13 11:16 AM

This has a beautiful flow to it Robert and is a pleasure to read aloud. I very much enjoyed this fine write.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2003-11-13 01:04 PM

Robert I like this one.
"stranded memories have no place to hide
washed up like broken shells "

Sleep is no escape, because they come back in all their glory. Well written.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-13 01:05 PM

we all return

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

6 posted 2003-11-14 01:52 PM

I like this one. We're all in a sea of dreams in our own little world. Nice work.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-11-14 01:56 PM

(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, such a sonorous oceanic bliss fills these words and fills every poets lungs with melisma, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-11-14 04:32 PM

enjoyed

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

9 posted 2003-11-14 04:39 PM

thanks all, and esp. you, Noah Eaton, for always sharing words of kindness - need more you in the world!

Rf

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

10 posted 2003-11-14 05:31 PM

Hello Robert

I enjoyed your words so very much.

"A poet weaves his words
through each verse to create
a most beautiful tapestry
for us all to admire"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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