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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2003-11-13 11:09 AM


Wake up dreamer, to morning tide
another season has passed you by
See how the light slows
its yellowed shadows fade to white
Dying waves of passion like
stranded memories have no place to hide
washed up like broken shells
passed over till buried deep
return again, a sea of dreams
to sleep



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1 posted 2003-11-13 11:11 AM


Beautiful verse Robert!
Very much enjoyed the feeling and flow.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-11-13 11:16 AM


Robert,
Enjoyed the read.  

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2003-11-13 11:16 AM


This has a beautiful flow to it Robert and is a pleasure to read aloud.  I very much enjoyed this fine write.
Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2003-11-13 01:04 PM


Robert I like this one.
"stranded memories have no place to hide
washed up like broken shells "

Sleep is no escape, because they come back in all their glory. Well written.


Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-11-13 01:05 PM


we all return
Hockeychick19
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6 posted 2003-11-14 01:52 PM


I like this one. We're all in a sea of dreams in our own little world. Nice work.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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7 posted 2003-11-14 01:56 PM




(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, such a sonorous oceanic bliss fills these words and fills every poets lungs with melisma, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vandana
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8 posted 2003-11-14 04:32 PM


enjoyed
Robert Frazier
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9 posted 2003-11-14 04:39 PM


thanks all, and esp. you, Noah Eaton, for always sharing words of kindness - need more you in the world!

Rf

Suetang
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10 posted 2003-11-14 05:31 PM


Hello Robert

I enjoyed your words so very much.

"A poet weaves his words
through each verse to create
a most beautiful tapestry
for us all to admire"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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