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Open Poetry #29

I gave you my heart

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-11-24 11:22 AM

I gave you my heart;
you took away my innocence...
I asked for something in return
and you responded,
"enough."
It was my voice
that tagged the walls of the pyramids
Searching for the passageway
to the eternity
of your love.
If my words mean nothing to you,
disregard this,
But somewhere in Africa,
where the land is fruitless and dry,
The elders of the tribe will recite my poetry
to their goddess,
And the clouds will rumble
with a compassionate cry...

Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master

[This message has been edited by Master (11-24-2003 11:30 AM).]

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-11-24 11:32 AM

But somewhere in Africa,
where the land is fruitless and dry,
The tribe elders will recite my poetry
to their goddess,
And the clouds will rumble
with a compassionate cry...

that mde the entire poem well worth the read...brilliant.

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