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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-11-20 10:10 PM

Moving Me

I see glimpses of you
that bends in light
of rays of windows
that completely warms
and respects my skin
my mind wrinkles
at the thought of
your very touch
I am tied to your
invisible strings and
know the knowledge
in truth is that
before you it was
an act of taking air
in and releasing it
but now I know
how to breathe

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-11-20 10:18 PM

....and you dear lady are a breath of springtime. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-11-20 10:41 PM

OneSlick~
You've done it again ... sooooo touching~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-11-20 11:04 PM

Very nice.
Love,
Terri~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-11-20 11:21 PM

(smiles) Yes, you can breathe, and you can sing too, so let the air always fill your lungs, yay! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2003-11-20 11:33 PM

Very nice, expressive verse. Especially like the line:

"my mind wrinkles"

particularly as it follows the "respects my skin" line.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-11-21 03:18 AM

just beautiful Helen, you seem happy

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (11-21-2003 03:19 AM).]

Rdz9
Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

7 posted 2003-11-24 09:49 AM

As winter begins to move in... this was a very nice read.

One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world...

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