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Windowed Eyes
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Windowed Eyes |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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We stare, through windowed eyes, with aching sadness the tree looks inside, married to the ground, but longing, she wavers though in shoes of iron, she is bound. Through frosted glass, we touch, bare souls, lock arms. How may i help you, dear child? perhaps anesthisize you with complacency's spell, numbbing your pipedreams, once and for all, or shall i pray for you instead my sweet one, to wiggle free on sheer faith, averting amputation on your curtain call. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-20-2003 10:53 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, your poetry always has so much depth and true emotion to it I enjoy beholding! (sigh) I love this, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michele, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Nice. Very nice. Loved the contrast of the last 2 stanzas "Anesthetization" vs. "Amputation" Oh, the choices of life! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd...this is sad  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I don't know what to say... this is sad, it leaves me speechless beautiful though.. very... Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This speaks volumes... thank you... regards sudhir |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Kinda different. Another side of Michele, huh? |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Those things can change, and often do. I like this introspective side of you very much. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I liked this as well, your eyes write such graphics wise and significant. Thank you for sharing. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you kindly for reading and taking the time to comment |
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