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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-11-20 10:16 PM




We stare,
through windowed eyes,
with aching sadness
the tree looks inside,
married to the ground,
but longing, she wavers
though in shoes of iron,
she is bound.

Through frosted glass,
we touch,
bare souls, lock arms.

How may i help you,
dear child?
perhaps anesthisize you
with complacency's spell,
numbbing your pipedreams,
once and for all,

or shall i pray
for you instead
my sweet one,
to wiggle free
on sheer faith,
averting amputation
on your curtain call.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-20-2003 10:53 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-20 10:28 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, your poetry always has so much depth and true emotion to it I enjoy beholding! (sigh) I love this, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michele, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

steavenr
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2 posted 2003-11-21 01:33 AM


Nice. Very nice.

Loved the contrast of the last 2 stanzas

"Anesthetization" vs. "Amputation"

Oh, the choices of life!

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-11-21 02:42 AM


gawd...this is sad
GG
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4 posted 2003-11-21 02:45 AM


I don't know what to say...
this is sad, it leaves me speechless
beautiful though.. very...

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Sudhir Iyer
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5 posted 2003-11-21 03:02 PM


This speaks volumes... thank you...

regards
sudhir

bklynboy
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6 posted 2003-11-23 10:24 PM


Kinda different. Another side of Michele, huh?
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7 posted 2003-11-24 01:32 AM


Those things can change, and often do. I like this introspective side of you very much.

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LeeJ
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8 posted 2003-11-24 08:38 AM


I liked this as well, your eyes write such graphics wise and significant.  Thank you for sharing.
inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2003-11-24 12:06 PM


thank you kindly for reading and taking the time to comment
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