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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-11-22 09:39 PM



Tommrow it rains again
the sky is dark the clouds
are black. Thunder lighting
strike.

I walk outside where it beats
down on my head. thinking about
what has been done and what has
been said. Barefoot and feeling
corupted inside. Makes me yern for
a simpler time.

Make a face in the mirror laugh
point and call me names. Make
yourself look sane. The curtains
are red the water is black the soaps
I just bought are carefully sculpted
cats.

The sun sets the rain dies down
another day go to sleep. Wake up
and think away.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2003 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
mytuesdaywishes
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since 2003-09-05
Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox
1 posted 2003-11-22 09:54 PM


very nice and straightforward...work on the spelling a bit :Þ

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2003-11-22 11:10 PM


ty I edited them after i write them
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-11-23 04:19 AM


pretty good, I enjoyed the read
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