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Rain Sets |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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Tommrow it rains again the sky is dark the clouds are black. Thunder lighting strike. I walk outside where it beats down on my head. thinking about what has been done and what has been said. Barefoot and feeling corupted inside. Makes me yern for a simpler time. Make a face in the mirror laugh point and call me names. Make yourself look sane. The curtains are red the water is black the soaps I just bought are carefully sculpted cats. The sun sets the rain dies down another day go to sleep. Wake up and think away. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
very nice and straightforward...work on the spelling a bit :Þ joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
ty I edited them after i write them |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty good, I enjoyed the read |
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