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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2003-11-22 08:42 PM



To keep the facial lines in shape
from the forehead to the nape
and set a gag or two with you in mind
will you spot me with much to find..

A hidden cyclist who hooks you from the rear
you're pedals slow down..there's naught to fear
there's that gag in progress and out of sight
won't you go along and accept some fright?


Or will life weave you into nervous turmoil
be your face all washed, yet forever soiled
'cause a joke that's hidden and out of view
seemsextraordinary from a follower's pew...


we are blessed with lines to shape
that express latent humour as of late
to extend a hand...catch another's smile
would help me pedal for another mile

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-22-2003 08:44 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-11-22 08:55 PM


--pedalling miles,
  gathering smiles! ~ I like that!

Hugs 'n smiles,
EA

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displaced
2 posted 2003-11-23 04:21 AM


very creative
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