Open Poetry #29 |
Fields Of Gold With NewEnglandlazurlu |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
~NewEnglandlazurlu~ November rain Light thin and shallow Comes the winter and dark bites deep In twilight where shadows creep Dusk where spirits would pause and sleep ~Vandana~ November rain And then comes the winter dawn With the shadows of nights While fields of gold Still growing And wondered where stars shone bright [This message has been edited by vandana (11-22-2003 07:41 PM).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lovely and soothing - Twice! Thank you! Liz |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
West meets East in a most delightful and poetic way! Lovely poem by two lovely poetesses! Warm huggums to each of you! Linda |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very lovely...quite a collaboration, you two! Duet again! |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
nice, I really liked it |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely...much enjoyed! Hug to you both~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is quite beautiful |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Beautiful duet... I love it. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! This is really beautiful! Thanks to both poets! |
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