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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Only the breath is constant. Everything else flickers to the whims of our existence. In moments of our deepest longing - We may simply disappear. It's the breath that always brings us back to taste the flesh of holy pleasures. It's the breath...until our very last desire. When other pleasures call. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May you always know consistency. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, may love forever be constant but all at once fluctuate with many different blessings and feelings, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ 'In moments of our deepest longing - We may simply disappear' There have been times that I've wished I could~ This is wonderful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
In moments of our deepest longing - We may simply disappear. I admire the articulate beauty in your poetry.. This is stunning, Ericc~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And sometimes I have my doubts about breath. *S* This is excellent! *S* |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Ill just take a deep and constant breath right know............. Smile Jes |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gah, this is wonderful...magnificant.. saving to the library.. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Only the breath is constant. Everything else flickers to the whims of our existence. Eric, my goodness, you just keep getting better and better. This is incredible! After reading this, I sat still (something almost impossible in my house) and became aware of my breathing. What peace I gained from your words! Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Only the breath is constant. Everything else flickers to the whims of our existence." Beautiful as always Eric! Much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am one who is in touch with my breathing and I appreciate each breath ~ and your poem!  Lovely!  EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
With every breath the precious awareness of life and love is renewed. Breathing with you, taking in your beauty, is a holy pleasure I would never want to miss! I love you, Margherita |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ericc, this is just lovely. Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Very nice. You use words like Picasso used his brush. SG |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Beautiful... delicious in its spiritual sensuality... and profoundly sweet in its wisdom. I love you, Moca |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
wow, these replies really scared me. i think i'll go write a poem about how annoyingly happy you all are. but still.......a good poem |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
It's the breath, yes. Beautifully written. ~K~ |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
So beautiful. Margot |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
There is one other constant, my dear Eric... the exquisite beauty of your art. Thank you, as always. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and you leave me breathless |
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