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The Craftsman |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Craftsman I’m not a master craftsman sir Most I do is just a blur My wave in crest is not the best Yet only time in true the test. Sometimes I judge my works naive I often wear my heart my sleeve Never the less I do attest I do my very, very best Perhaps my symbol soup is lean But then again my minds not keen I find I fall through many holes And some I cannot pay the tolls And though I watch with ample Eye I often heave with breathes of sigh And rub my feet the heat beneath And cannot find a proper sheath. Within my heart I weave my rhymes It is to me the best of times. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You give to all the best of times when we see your morning rhymes. Good Saturday morning, Sy... let's wake 'em up, shall we???  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Your poetry brings warmth and sunshine! loved the last lines... ~ARH  [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (11-22-2003 07:50 AM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
excellent, as usual... goodmorning, sir  Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Shall we with a ;Kiss: Romantic, Good morning love. Top of the morning to ya, Alyssa. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Very much enjoyed, you have music in your words, great. Sincerely Rick |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a beautiful poem to wake up with! Goodmorning Seymour!  Neeraja |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick Thank you kind sir. Neeraja Good morning dear. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I beg to differ Sy. In my books, you are a word craftsman. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio, Thank you, you are kind. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellently crafted! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc, Thank you for the read and reply. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You, m'dear sonneteer, are a master weaver! I enjoy wrapping myself in the fabric of your memorable writes, each and every day!  Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Seymour This poem is refreshing, and brings about very familiar feelings... _______ice ><> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, And you are the heroine of this blue. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
me too! yes! a very good write, expressing well the art |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice, Enjoyed your reply. Thank you passing. |
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