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Chrissysue
Junior Member

since 2003-11-21

Posts 23
Nebraska

0 posted 2003-11-21 06:57 PM

A shooting star, you say
And point it's path accross the sky
The heavens may be crowded
But right here it's just you and I
You touch my face so gently
Run your fingers through my hair
My heart begins to pound
A longing I cannot bear
I want to say I love you
How much I need your touch
Your kiss spins me in circles
I've never needed you so much
But I bite my tongue, hold my words
Far to scared to speak
The truth may set me free
But the future could be bleak
What if you don't say the words
If you don't love me back
My heart would break in two
Heartache bleeding black
But you take my face in both your hands
And kiss away my blue
I tingle from head to toe
A kiss so firm and true
I lay my head upon your chest
Wondering what to do
Do I share my heart tonight
Or just keep on loving you

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2003-11-21 07:12 PM

Chrissysue,
You really shared those apprehensive feelings very well! I enjoyed this very much and look forward to reading more.
Sadelite

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-11-21 08:09 PM

I could picture it

Very lovely...
what a wonderful night, and a wonderful poem! Well done

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Chrissysue
Junior Member

since 2003-11-21

Posts 23
Nebraska

3 posted 2003-11-21 08:49 PM

thank you very much for your comments *S*

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-11-22 04:53 AM

I could feel the feeling of being in limbo. I hope you have a good outcome.

Love,
Terri~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-11-22 10:55 AM

welll written longing and questionning
and I think you know the answer

stay the course, listen to your heartbeat

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-11-22 01:44 PM

I have to agree with MidniteSun

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-11-22 01:47 PM

Chrissysue,
Lovely enjoyed the read.

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