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Petals Soaking
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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{Will you remember me when frozen smoke rises and the air once again dims} Will you see motion between us; my years of love to & for you has never had boundaries? words between us, beyond pain and meaning will we be inthralled? I have the taste of your lips next to my eyes -- inside, my soul longing to be released -- set free with purpose Shadows will enter me from all directions darkness falls -- & midnights rename my belongings of how I am always reminded of orchids and rain, endless seas & endless loss, they slide my skin each winter soaking petals for life Silence can be an unbreakable world in which madness lies -- slipping indifferently to delight, movement of thoughts standing motionless on shores soft edges of earth Quietly let the dance settle on my shoulders & again with the moon, my memories will bleed alone ~~**~~ I had a dream last night you came to me on silver wings of light I flew away with you in painted sky Was it real Is it what you see,touch or feel [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (11-19-2003 01:00 AM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I'm searching for the words to explain, how it leaves me, these words you offer... and my own would not do justice to how your talent is appreciated and your art is greedily eaten by my eyes... maybe one day I'll be able to answer one of your posts with something more than my jaw on the floor, but don't hold your breath waiting.. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Nice. Very nice. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The Captain took the words right out of my mouth ~ mind you, he arranged them far better than I could have, Dear Laurena Poetessa!  Warm hugs, Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh...my...goodness. Beautiful. hugs, Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Quietly let the dance settle on my shoulders & again with the moon, my memories will bleed alone" ~~**~~ I'm with the Captain, Lauren...speechless!!! Bravo poetess Lauren. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Lauren, as always your writing is amazing. I have no clever reply, so will you just accept my admiration and respect? Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hmm...quietly sitting here, soaking in the scent of this, as if surrounded by nightime shadows of orchids. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Gorgeous -- simply beautiful, Greeneyes! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Silence can be an unbreakable world in which madness lies -- I don't often use this term... but it's applicable here... brilliant! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am always reminded of orchids and rain, endless seas & endless loss, they slide my skin each winter soaking petals for life Silence can be an unbreakable world ~*~ You continue to outdo yourself. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Shadows will enter me from all directions darkness falls -- & midnights rename my belongings of how I am always reminded of orchids and rain, endless seas & endless loss, they slide my skin each winter soaking petals for life Silence can be an unbreakable world in which madness lies -- slipping indifferently to delight, movement of thoughts standing motionless on shores soft edges of earth Quietly let the dance settle on my shoulders & again with the moon, my memories will bleed alone =============================== midnights rename my belongings could that line be any more awesome? me thinks not...... Silence can be an unbreakable world your poetry breaks the silence of my stunned muse and for that I am always grateful to be able to read the graceful beauty of your words.  When I'm with you my eyes are so wide ... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you always turn the petals into perfume and fill the atmosphere of your gorgeous visions with sagacious incense! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, your poetry is grist for all that is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
such grace and beauty...such a sigh.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...james |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well, I've read it...Swirled it around the glass a bit, and tested it's bouquet. A reserve vintage to be sure. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love to read you on days like this...not pushed for time, sun shining through blinds, door open to windchimes... |
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