Willow Drops . . . . . . . . haiku

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Open Poetry #29

Willow Drops . . . . . . . . haiku

Ratleader

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0 posted 2003-11-22 02:23 AM

Rain-heavy willow
on every leaf a warm drop
trembling at the tip

steavenr
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1 posted 2003-11-22 03:19 AM

Well, I certainly like this. The willow always seems so burdened.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-11-22 03:53 AM

sweeeeet!

A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2003-11-22 08:53 AM

WOW!

I think trees do cry..and the willow seems so sad...enjoyed your thoughts!

~ARH :heart

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Sunshine

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4 posted 2003-11-22 09:52 AM

Smiling here....

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-11-22 10:06 AM

Perfect image!

Eric

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Member Rara Avis

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6 posted 2003-11-22 11:55 AM

totally WOW!!!

what a view you have superbly placed

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Sadelite
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7 posted 2003-11-22 01:17 PM

Ratleader,
Again you did it--you came up with the perfect imagery. Incredible write.
Sadelite

Greeneyes

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8 posted 2003-11-22 01:47 PM

WOW Ed,

you have a way with these.....most beautiful, and the images I see.....thank you....hugssssssssss

Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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9 posted 2003-11-23 05:04 PM

Again, you paint a vivid picture for us that delights on many levels. This is simply superb!!!

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