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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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I kept my fingers crossed holding out hope that you might spare me knowing that you never would understanding why you never could after all my mudslinging it's pay back time and now I know. There is no meeting half way or happy medium in between all that's left is hurt feelings and for that I am truly sorry for I know as sure as the sun will rise it will not shine for you and I. Your heart is a kind and gentle one sadly mine was in the wrong place long before our time if there ever was~ |
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Magic Solias Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 73California, USA |
Difficult to be that honest, to see so clear. Magic Solias |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A true champion is one who accepts defeat gracefully....and raises their hand when asked if they were wrong.... You are a champion.... |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
His loss my friend. By now you probably know this to be true. I just wrote a terrible feeling I have, called "Wrong I may be" Sounds like we have something on our minds. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hugsss sweet lady....I admire how you speak truth in every word you write.....peace to your mind and heart.....  lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no no one swift kick, first,,,,, a little bit of street justice from a streetgirl then let him go................. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn you know I know |
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She Junior Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 41Wishing On A Northern Star |
minus the mudslinging part, I know someone I could send this to.  I hate breaking hearts...but it happens when I don't want it to. "You put a stain on all of my good days." |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
hard truth, but you wrote of it well. Well done... Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"all that's left is hurt feelings and for that I am truly sorry" Ditto...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade A very gentle let down. Well done. |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Well done with a lot of feeling. Even with insects- |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
still blue, I see... a walk along the beach??? I will join you in thought  M |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Sad. Words are like bullets, once loosed no power in the universe can recall them. You don't need me to tell you that you are a good person, but I will anyway. You are a good person.  |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
""" Your heart is a kind and gentle one sadly mine was in the wrong place long before our time if there ever was~ """ This is the only part i dont want to say its true, some of it yes but not that you dont have a heart smile you are the one taht has it with these words of truth. I trust your big heart, just out of your words. Smile thumb up for you. jes |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you all for reading this, and more importantly for allowing me to make my peace and find it here. It's like a long good-bye that has come to an end, and at this point, it is all that I had hoped for. Thank you again, for letting me be, in spite of all my shades of blue~ Warm hugs all around you~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, perhaps it's not your time but just follow your heart and let the payback be made on achieving your destiny and coming up strong! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh...I missed this.... ...and I miss you. Don't be gone too long, eh? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
sad... Courageous. Rf |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
reading this, I can only but concur... there was... hugs to you dear friend... tight hugs... I know of the loss you speak/write of... regards sudhir |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
BluesSerenade, This poem shows such humility. To understand and take responsiblity for such insight is awesome! You are on an upward plane, a higher level than most. Thanks for your sharing and raising the bar.. SG |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved this one  |
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Chrissysue Junior Member
since 2003-11-21
Posts 23Nebraska |
Thank you for sharing such a heartfelt poem. I can identify with it .. especially now in my life. Some very well turned phrases as well.. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Where the heck are you, Blues??? I miss you! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I know that it may be difficult at times, but each of us must first be true Blue to ourself... and that is what you appear to be doing. A gentle write from a gentle soul. Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am wondering too..where you have gone... hugss M |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
lori, your writing always touches me deep within...for your words are always so honest and truthful, even at times like this, painfully so. but i respect and admire you more than you know, both not only as a poetress but as a person! this took true courage. take care, amy p.s. drop me a e-mail if you want to talk or anything. "love is like a butterfly-- |
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