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Burning Tears
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Burning Tears |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA 
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I sit here and wonder why me? In this salty water I cry more, Tears are burning drop by drop, Someone please help me, Make them stop. I’m there for you, But not ever for myself, I try to let it out and tell you, But no matter how hard I try, I seem to stay locked deep inside this shell. Burning must stop, My eyes hurt, Swollen and puffy, I feel like I’m nothing. Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Very sad, and hurtful place to be.  Love, Terri~  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hockeychick19, the time will come when all changes, we feel your pain and as friends are there for you, take care and chin up, smile at the world a little and you might see it smiling back, take care my friend and be better. Your time is in your writing and poets have thick shells, oneday you will break free. Sincerely Rick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hockeychick19 Change is the driving force of life. Good write. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Powerful and poingant words. This can only come from the voice of...."somebody" special. Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: be there for yourself once in a while, and see what might happen hearthugs  |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
SharaRose yes it certainly is a sad and hurtful place to be... Thanks for reading it. Rick I hope the day I can feel free comes sooner rather than later. And thanks for the encouraging words. Seymour Tabin I'm glad you enjoyed it... Thank you very much. Eric thank you... Your words mean a lot. Midnitesun I'll try it... Thaks for the advice. Thank you everyone  ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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martina Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 59 |
you did a great job on this one. martina |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Thanks Carrie... I'm glad you liked it. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
very Much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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