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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri

0 posted 2003-10-29 11:11 AM



Prelude to the kiss
trembling hands and nervous words
lick of lips gone dry

Prelude to the kiss
hours spent in maybe yes
what if... maybe no

Prelude to the kiss
giving in to hearts desire
just a taste...for now


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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-10-29 11:15 AM


Paula?

yes indeed . . .
fire in your head and feet . . .
quenched . . .
this is lovely
xxoo

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-10-29 11:39 AM


Paula ,
Well done, enjoyed.

Logan
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
3 posted 2003-10-29 12:57 PM


How very well done, Paula. Enjoyed this very much...very gentle smile
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-10-29 01:00 PM


oh yes...very nice write
Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
5 posted 2003-11-23 09:00 PM


blah i do sound like you =Þ oh well you still have a way of writting good things

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies.   Dimmu Borgir

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2008-01-28 02:17 PM


very descriptive words!

ARCTIC WIND

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