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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2003-11-21 11:36 AM


Your words
like fingers of the sun
warm my soul completely
these strings of pain
undone


[This message has been edited by Robert Frazier (11-21-2003 11:43 PM).]

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-11-21 11:38 AM



* EXQUISITE *

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-11-21 11:45 AM


Soft lights
of morning ray's awake
sorting out the day's ware
clothing the spirit
to reign


*s

M

Robert Frazier
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3 posted 2003-11-21 11:59 AM


M, what a beautiful ray of sunshine!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2003-11-21 12:03 PM



Sol's rise
Giving newness
To the edge of daybreak
Shines upon a poet's dreaming
Sending out to one and all, rites of light
Soon to reach its zenith on high
Gently it slips away
Tomorrow's gift
Sol's rise

~*~

Thank you for the inspiration, Robert

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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5 posted 2003-11-21 12:11 PM


pennyless yet richness soothing
forming a trilogy of warmth, youth
and forever more, memories to recharge the soul.  

Loverly song

Robert Frazier
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6 posted 2003-11-21 12:18 PM


S, "Shines upon a poet's dreaming"...you certainly do that with your poetry!
more than flattered to inspire you!


Lee, perfect!
Rf

[This message has been edited by Robert Frazier (11-21-2003 12:21 PM).]

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-11-21 01:04 PM


now this...is nice
1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
8 posted 2003-11-21 01:14 PM


sigh

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
9 posted 2003-11-21 02:22 PM


WOW!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
10 posted 2003-11-21 02:32 PM


Timely write with the solar eclipse soon upon us! Being a Leo, I am already feeling the effects of it quite strongly!

Your poem was a little piece of perfection!!!

Warm hugs,
EA

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10
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11 posted 2003-11-21 02:34 PM


Love this...love everyone's reponses too!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
12 posted 2003-11-21 05:07 PM


Hello Robert

This was simply breathtaking.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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