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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Sitting While sitting silently at home I let my mind go forth and roam And thoughts did sit a table’s treat A gourmets dish with savored meat I held my rind of circumstance And there I left my mind to dance Upon the ruffles of its lace And warming embers of embrace It brought a smile, this muse this wraith It seemed to form by simple faith This sheltered cove this sandy Isle A moth a butterfly this wile That twittered on the edge of glean Just beyond my touch of scene And brought a sigh unto my eye I did not wish it wave goodbye My butterflies grow fewer now Fewer those my years allow |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
ah beautiful! Some good food and a good view, nothin better! Love it  Y'know, you're always so punctual coming here and it just reminds me once again I haven't slept, but then I never slept since the last time I said that.. or the few days before.. lol life is amusing... again, love it. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Butterflies flutter still in my stomache when I feast on love... Brilliant as usual... ~ARH  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I like the flutter of your morning thoughts~ 'I held my rind of circumstance And there I left my mind to dance Upon the ruffles of its lace And warming embers of embrace' *sigh* *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Morning Sy!! I think that butterfly knows the way home well.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alyssa, It is nice to read your comment every morning.  Romantic, You sure you're not part butterfly. LOL Marge, Love you too.  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Your words dance like butterflies among the daisies, Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It brought a smile, this muse this wraith It seemed to form by simple faith This sheltered cove this sandy Isle A moth a butterfly this wile ~*~ Methinks none of us would have it any other way. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sy, this brought a smile to the core of this poet...your always so in tune with the eccentric of a million classics, and then some.... Good morning kiddo...wishing you a great weekend ahead, and thanks for this wonderful bageland hazelnut coffee, swirling around in my room. Lovely |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah! What a beautiful morning read Sy! Can you take a break for a cup of tea with me? It's been a long week...come sit and we'll chat. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Nice of you to say that. Sunshine, Methinks you are right. LeeJ, This reads like your old charming self. Have a good one. Nancy, I'd be delighted. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ I don't know why, but when I read your title, "Sitting" I cracked up! I literally broke out laughing. I have to think on this a bit while I'm here just "sitting". lol Oh, no! Here I go again. It's a lovely poem but I guess I have a bad case of the gigglepussies this beautiful late fall day!  Yes, I am a little bit nutzoid at times! ~ but my excuse is that it is because I'm creative! lol Love ya! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, Then you liked the egg I hatched? LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I held my rind of circumstance And there I left my mind to dance Upon the ruffles of its lace And warming embers of embrace It brought a smile, this muse this wraith It seemed to form by simple faith This sheltered cove this sandy Isle A moth a butterfly this wile That twittered on the edge of glean Just beyond my touch of scene And brought a sigh unto my eye I did not wish it wave goodbye ======================= There's no need to wave goodbye ... the butterflies return to *sigh* for Sy.  *winkiewinkie*  When I'm with you my eyes are so wide ... you reached right in my head and turned on the light inside turned on the light in my mind. David Gray [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (11-21-2003 11:46 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And you are my main butterfly. WWRS [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (11-21-2003 05:04 PM).] |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi Seymour...damn fine piece this morning my friend. You make me smile each time I get to read your stuff. It's like reading myself sometimes. Not that I can do these themes as well as you do...but sometimes I believe this is how my work will look when I have but matured just a little. Bravo my friend! Very well done. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
EvocativeVerse2 Thank you for the comp, I enjoy your replies. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
And thoughts did sit a table’s treat ... they did, my friend regards sudhir |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
You made me smile. Thank you.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You've warmed my heart from the start. I've been away awhile and you're my frist read.This so brought me smiles Crystal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Thank you my friend. Pilgrimage A smile is good. Crystal, Thank you sweet. |
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