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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Struck how is it my heart overwhelms me it may not be right the way I feel but it does not change the fact of it for I know it in the aroma before I touch its taste |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some things just are...no matter the questions we ask |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
it may not be right the way I feel but it does not change the fact of it How true... *S* My ex used to think he could argue me out of feeling something... ha! *G* |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ah, this one is purest Helen....beautifully said, and utterly true. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
you, helen, are the "aroma" - R |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
This poem is almost happy, but there is also great sadness under it. All the same it is very good to read. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Yes, very perceptive. When you figure it out please let me know. I think it's just that there are some things that can never be explained. (Mere mortals that we are  )Enjoyed very much. SG |
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