Open Poetry #29 |
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A Haiku of Lil Boy Blue |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
“Ya did it again, Lil Boy, Ya fell asleep on watch. The cows are out, and we’ve got to chase! Get on yawr boots and mawrch!” “Honest, honestly, Maw, I’ve been keepin’ watch! In the haiku I saw with my left eye right open, the cows aren’t in the corn-- Cattle scattering among the green brown meadow grazing last fresh grass.” [This message has been edited by Sadelite (11-21-2003 04:37 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wow, I liked |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite, A delight to read. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Sadelite...this is really cute. I love it. Very well done...I truly enjoyed this poem. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
LOL What a hoot and a half! I enjoyed yer sense of 'humaw' ~ and yer poem! ![]() Love & Laughter, EA |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Lee J, I'm glad you liked... Have a great weekend! Sadelite Seymour, You couldn't have flattered me anymore. Thank you. Sadelite Earth Angel, Really--only a hoot and a half? I had hoped you'd put the whole two hoots worth in. I know, bad pun, but it's Friday after work! What can I say? Thanks for your clever humawr! EV2, Thanks, EV.! I'm glad I got a smile out of you. I'm probably breaking every rule in the poetry book, but ignorance is bliss! Sadelite |
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