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Gigging At Midnight
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Gigging At Midnight |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
I stand in water ankle deep listening to croaking taunts around me. "Kneedeep" the baratones argue. The circle of light finds eyes unafraid. My spear arrows out sinking in spine. It rises to the surface, a toothpick in the martini pond. And gigged to the end grins an unhappy frog. Larry W. Allen [This message has been edited by dingusjr (09-26-2003 02:24 AM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was much enjoyed.  Crystal |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yeow, welcome aboard, dingus! You are one person I'm particularly glad to see, and I hope you decide to make it permanent. A good choice this, for a first post.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"I stand in water ankle deep listening to croaking taunts around me. "Kneedeep" the baratones argue." Okay...even though I do have to say, 'poor frog', I also have to admit this gave me a chuckle. Enjoyed this, Larry. Welcome to Passions! When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-26-2003 02:00 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a splash you've made! Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
ewwww, no thanks! But I love the way you wrote this, I felt like I was there. Gigging, huh? ok. Welcome to Passions! ~K~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
dingusjr Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS LARRY! Much enjoyed your first post! I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Weclome to Passions enjoyed bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ha do I ever know this...although I can't honestly say I ever could actually gig the frog...too cute ya know? |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Well done! I know that pond all too well. Patricia |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I knew a kid who used to do that using a 50-lb recurved bow and broadhead arrows....talk about overkill! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I get saddened when people interfere with their symphonies, dearest friend, my heart goes out to all of nature and I pray the frogs, crickets, and birds, every living thing can sing without being rudely interrupted! This is a powerful debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Larry, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your loely words! I can't wait to read more of your poignant words, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!    May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-26-2003 09:23 PM).] |
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