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wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
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0 posted 2003-11-20 10:09 PM



Hung above the night,
celestial smile so bright
taking hearts
into her auditorium.
Auditions about to begin-
Classical Music,
Candlelight,
A glass of wine,
passed down the line...
to the lonely hand
in the Royal Music Gown.
Into her Auditorium
gypsys bring their dreams
men bring their schemes,
let it all be sorted out
underneath moonbeams.

SMC

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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-11-20 10:16 PM


very nice enjoyed. Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-11-20 10:18 PM


Well this poem certainly brought a smile to my face!

I can picture the scene as I write this reply!


EA

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-11-21 04:59 AM


this is pretty cool...
James_A_Fraser
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Out Making Anticlines
4 posted 2003-11-23 09:46 AM


Good atmosphere! I like this very much.



~~J

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