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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-11-21 11:06 PM

You wore the sun
the day
we kissed,
the sea sang
a lullabye, the
sky rolled like
blue marbles, the color
of your grinning eyes,
and you squinted,
when you snuck
your arm
around me,
you said you'd
marry me,i'd be
your girl, and we'd
be together
till the end of
time,
then the moving
men captured you
with their giant
claws, they wisked
you off, leaving
me sobbing, waving
goodbye,
so i stuck my tongue out,
at you, at life, and
wore long brown pigtails,
and black maryjanes,
on that day in may
when you owned my
first broken heart.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-22-2003 10:57 PM).]

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2003-11-22 02:43 AM

OMIGOSH! How could such a sweet poem have no replies yet? I adore this and the innocent picture it creates for me.

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-11-22 03:05 AM

and we never forget the first one

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-11-22 05:06 AM

:'( Sweet, but so sad.
Terri~

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

4 posted 2003-11-22 10:48 AM

Touching....and touchingly told. Mind if I add this one to my library?

~~J

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-11-22 10:20 PM

thanks guys, and james sure go ahead

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

6 posted 2003-11-23 06:24 AM

Sometimes sad beginnings have happy endings. Who knows, maybe the moving man will deliver your boyhood sweetheart back. Really well done work and touching!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-11-23 07:57 AM

thanks for reading and relating.....yes bboy, sometimes i think he already did in a way

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2003-11-23 09:15 AM

Inkedgoddess, again you touch me with your powerful tale. Ahh those moments when the world really seemed to crash and we would not believe that the sun would rise again ...
Love, Margherita

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