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Open Poetry #29

Everything I Am

Cassandra 98
Junior Member

since 2002-12-08

Posts 17

0 posted 2003-11-20 09:13 PM

I stand here closed and open
Reaching in
To pull back the curtains

This broken body
My muscles aching, flesh is restless, my head twisted, my heart throbbing, my bones in extrication, spasms in my back increasing, this fear is unceasing

Its swirling all around me
As I wonder dramatically

The future
The past
All unsurpassed

I'm falling with urgency
Tearing back my sence of security

Everything I am is resting in my jar

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-11-20 09:17 PM

Cassandra 98,
Seal it and put it in the ocean.
Who knows where it will go.
Good write, enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-11-21 03:17 AM

you are good at these...very vivid emotion

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2003-11-21 03:19 AM

I know this one...
and the dumb meds only make ya tired, eh?
...you write it well.
Keep it up.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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