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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
My Pledge How many times can you say "I love you" Capture the splendor deep inside Say those words what does it cost you Are you giving up some kind of pride When you remark on nature's beauty Are you aware that you play a part All the colors in the rainbow Lay the foundation of the dreamers heart When you see the butterfly linger Tasting dew in the morning sun Capture the spendor of the moment Before the tasting is all done When you hold me soft and close And your silence speaks in beat When greater gifts are not mine to give And you are feeling lost and weak When the moon and sun are not enough And other souls have lost their way I will comfort you in silence Yes, I'll be there and there I'll stay |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"When the moon and sun are not enough And other souls have lost their way I will comfort you in silence Yes, I'll be there and there I'll stay" How very beautiful..a statement of unconditional love. Very much enjoyed this piece. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"When you remark on nature's beauty Are you aware that you play a part All the colors in the rainbow Lay the foundation of the dreamers heart" ~ So much depth to your words. The above are my favorite--of several!--lines. A beautiful poem of enduring love.  EA |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
a loving and beautiful pledge from the heart! speaks volumes , love dripping from every side....sweeeeeet...  ~ARH |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A very beautiful pledge of comfort and commitment...perhaps a wedding vow lingering to be spoken... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is sooooooooo beautiful and I wish this loves true happiness to always sing in your heart and pledge allegiance to your smile! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This is as sweet as can be. Who could ask for more? Very nice.  Love, Terri~  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how lucky could a person be? lovely write! |
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