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Open Poetry #29

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eulalie
New Member

since 2003-11-16

Posts 8

0 posted 2003-11-20 08:16 PM

If anyone can think of a good name for this poem I would apprecitate it.

Naked at 4 a.m. writhing poems
To empty my thoughts
Until my penmanship grows lax.
I go to bed,
but my pen quit
long before my head.

There is a whisper across
my face from hair you misplaced. The stench of your
sex brings me to my feet, and I pray that God will
bring me Lilith and wet dreams-

I cry out like Adam must have done when she left
Him in the garden to be half of one
One of half
of one
of none

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-11-20 09:13 PM

eulalie,
How about wet dream LOL clever, enjoyed the read.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2003-11-21 10:35 PM

keep up the penmanship under any situation...welcome to Passions

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