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jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-11-21 07:07 PM

The lone wolf sings to the night,
The sound echoes, and echoes again
…again.

A slight breeze carries promises of tomorrow.
I sit…quietly,
Secreted in my private place.

I watch the universe slide by,
Star by myriad star.
Dancing around each other,
Lovers in an eternal embrace.

My muscles stir.
Shhhhh…
Even the slightest move
Would break the spell,
Diminish the magic,
Shatter the enchantment.

So, I hunker down,
Insulated against the world,
And comforted by my aerie
On the edge of forever.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

[This message has been edited by jaicie114 (11-21-2003 07:10 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-11-21 07:20 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
What a beautiful entrance post!
I am sure you are going to love it here.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Please check your email for a special greeting!!

Nancy

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2003-11-21 07:37 PM

Welcome to Passions.
Beautiful first post. Enjoyed very much.
ThisDiamond

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-11-21 07:37 PM

Haunting and full of poignant beauty...excellent beginning
Jc.

Love,
Eric

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-11-21 08:00 PM

Jane~
Welcome to Passions~

A lovely entrance piece~

Pull up a chair and roam the halls of our many forums ... we have so many talented poets among us~
Thank you for being here with us~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

5 posted 2003-11-21 08:06 PM

awesome... as I read I kept reading so many lines that I wanted to pull out so I could say "this one's my favorite!" but there are just too many, I can't. It's all beautiful

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

6 posted 2003-11-21 10:35 PM

Thank you, everyone!

Wow...what a welcome! Yes, I'm sure I will love it here. Thank you for all the glorious comments!

Love and Light...jc

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