Open Poetry #29 |
Alia Iacta Est...Fall of 63 |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Alia Iacta Est... That fateful day upon the dark pavement, still warming as the sun climbed between moderately tall buildings of another era. Pigeons swirled overhead, awaiting a roost. A sentinel, repose of learning..ominously standing between mottled brick and clear glass. Waiting for a moment to arrive, one that would shatter the world around, as shots would be heard countless times in the minds of innocents lining an avenue, awaiting a fleeting glimpse of greatness...young, vibrant and so very alive. The classroom door opening suddenly as images of latin nobles swirled through young minds. A period of composing, interpreting and memorizing a foreign tongue...one difficult to remember... Except for three words...”Alia, Iacta, Est”... Oh, how I loved Caesar and Nero...and the Roman's of such grandeur. For on that moment of the door suddenly swinging ajar, the hushed and whispered lips of a pale face, wondering and worried eyes of youth staring through the blackboard....life changed as a shake of bones cast the die... I cringed, once I knew...I cried, once I could feel....I anguished, once I could stand and take a leaden step toward a door that led to home... The doors locked early, a flag hanging limp at half mast on that day, so far away, long ago when a giant fell. I shall never forget that image...nor shall I ever forget “Alia, Iacta, Est"... The Die Is Cast.... 11/22/63 [This message has been edited by Magnus (11-20-2003 10:21 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Oh my ... this is utterly chilling with remember~ I recall with heart touching clarity exactly where I was that moment ... holding my first born son ... only 23 days old in my arms ... and the shock and disbelief at the assasination of my President~ I remember that in college I wasn't old enough to vote when JFK was elected ... but worked diligently to see that he was. Our motto was, "You elect him ... we'll re-elect him !" And sadly, it wasn't to be~ Thank you for this ... it will be with me for a long, long time~ *HUGLETS* dearest poet~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A day we will all sadly remember Barry. Well done poet sir. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A Sad day for America once again captured in your words.. ~ARh |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Barry~ you have such a way that pulls so much emotion, this is so powerful! hugsss sir Lauren~ I had a dream last night |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
funny the things that stick in your mind, whether you plan them or not, on that day in november |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) I can't say that I remember, as this happened almost twenty years before I was born, but he truly was a very caring and giving president as I have read in many historical accounts and I too cry envisioning that tragic day! (sad sigh) I send many hugs your way as your memories are of great value to us all, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"wondering and worried eyes of youth staring through the blackboard....life changed as a shake of bones cast the die..." Wow! What a powerful image! Were you there in my classroom that fateful day? You reached into my psyche and pulled images of cataclysm from my soul. Thank you for taking the time to remember. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how vivid! an incredible write once again Barry |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
As an adult visiting Dealy Plaza, I was suddenly a 4th-grader again... listening to words crackling through a PA system that would shock a school into silence. There are moments burned into our memories... you've written this one well. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I cringed, once I knew...I cried, once I could feel....I anguished, once I could stand and take a leaden step toward a door that led to home... I betcha home never felt so good, did it? Tremendous write, but chills one to the bone |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
wow this is good writing...James |
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