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double helix (acrostic challenge)
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double helix (acrostic challenge) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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offerings of fingernail notes I've scribbled corneas enscripted feathers under lash sabled brush hiding eyes useries of pasquinade on the ledge of not enough seldom is the god agreed helix ever doubling... a time that was is nevermore mimicking eternity. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (11-18-2003 11:23 PM).] |
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Pip Member
since 2001-09-14
Posts 59 |
Holy Toledo! I'm ever impressed. I didn't catch the acrostic until I went back to figure out what an acrostic was, but by then I'd already read the poem and decided that I loved it. Now, it's twice as wonderful because of the technical difficulty. Completely impressed by your write. -me love |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Creative format. Very engaging. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ok who IS onceuponatimeshesighed? Karen, you outdid yourself here truly beautiful (how do you do this style? and why do I sense mascara?) xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (11-19-2003 04:18 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! awesome!  YES! |
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onceuponatimeshesighed New Member
since 2003-11-19
Posts 1 |
Here ya go. I'm all official now. and ya'll can just think of me as serenity's evil twin.  (can ya imagine?)  (onceuponatimeshe...exited)  bwahahahaha |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
show off! lol we know you are talented... you just continue to show us exactly how talented you are... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and then some. Go figure. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Cap? I wouldn't call hopping through hoops TALENT. (would have been easier for me to write another poem, I think) but Thanks all. I hope to be back later to read. A funny thing happened on the way to the forum...we got a COOL front in New Orleans. Think I'll go breathe while I can. Thanks again for reading.  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Cool beans girlie |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
LOL.. you'd not likely call anything you did taltented.. but we do.. so go enjoy the cool...if that's your bent today.. but when you write witch...we all know there is talent. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good grief!!! What talent! I love this!!!!! And you lady.... Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay, I just love the tunneling beauty of this, sweet friend, acrostics too can have vortexs and tailpipes and you had us all taken down into your poetic undertode! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I stand in awe Karen.. still shaking my head here and wondering when do the lessons begin.....*grinz* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
OH MY GOODNESSSSS!!!!! Can somebody take my feeble attempt off??  Now, I am really embarrassed!! Miss SereneOne is there anything you can't do perfectly??  *Me going off shaking my head* [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-19-2003 02:07 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey, Karen, you amazed me so much that I forgot to say that I love it!!!! You are gooooodddd!!!!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Super !! I love this !! hugs, Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Smiling at this...and you... You ARE amazing, you know...smile Love you, lady...  When the power of love overcomes the |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you sneaky thing, you . . . know I know what you meant before . . . always amazing me K *smiling here* xxoo |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
offerings of fingernail notes I've scribbled corneas enscripted feathers under lash sabled brush hiding eyes useries of pasquinade on the ledge of not enough ============================= you are so lovely me twin... I love the delicate grace of this...the vocab and presentation... that its an acrostic as well was a bonus treat..clever, clever is your gifted pen. enscripted feathers under lash sabled brush this is sooooo you When I'm with you my eyes are so wide ... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
nicely done Karen.... I had a dream last night |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
see? unbelievable... may I have this dance? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Simply a thing of beauty ~yeti |
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