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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-11-20 06:27 PM

Slow Dances

During the slow dances
she whispered, "There are
essential ingredients
that I require."
She mentioned some details
about size and positions
and she clarified the
importance of desire.

I was glad that she was
so sensually ambitious.
She was a woman that knew
what she wanted and as I
caressed the delicacies of
her desires I found her
to be delicious.

JamesLee
November17
2003

Magic Solias
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 73
California, USA

1 posted 2003-11-20 07:01 PM

Although you use very abstract language here, I can still follow you. Well we don't get to know the details. So it leaves us to imagine the rest. Passionate.

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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2 posted 2003-11-20 07:03 PM

I'll bet.... and this poem of her is delicious in its own right. Thanks for sharing it.

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scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

3 posted 2003-11-20 07:08 PM

Very sensual write, James. Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-11-20 07:46 PM

Love slow dancin'....
Good stuff here James.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2003-11-20 07:59 PM

Slow dances are very romantic....What kind of music do you like to slow dance to?

I like romantic love songs like "First time ever I saw Your Face"....Roberta Flack and classical music....Your poem also reminds me of the song.."slow dancin, swayin to the music...no one else in the whole wide world, just me and my girl."

You always write very romantically and passionate in such short but sweet words...

~ALWAYS ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (11-20-2003 08:02 PM).]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2003-11-20 10:20 PM

you are so very sensual.....I really loved this...

Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-11-20 10:23 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is so beautifully sensual! (big hugggsssssss) May you forever slow dance with that special someone to all kinds of music in all kinds of weather, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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8 posted 2003-11-21 04:22 AM

whew! it's hot!

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