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WashingtonIrving New Member
since 2003-11-20
Posts 1 |
Flatness, dampness, grey and blue with balls of pink on three long poles. They move as if they're perfect bass lines the world seems fine when you're at feed. Life tries to hide in sand and mud, in dirt beneath the lack of waves, but big will filter tiny out to feast until there's no more greed. Ridiculed legs - perfect bent. Neck up down smoothly sways. Adaptation-perfect bill so crooked. Sweeping graze. Startled take off, they have seen me sky before was opal blue. Now there's freedom-flocking-flying- flaming-bright-pink-air-to-view. Line bent central oval. Stubs propel, no haste. Beating pure rock colour. Deeper rhythm pace. Go pink flame, your clownish mask hides dignity and Rock and roll. Go pink flame, your clownish mask hides dignity and Rock and roll. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Startled take off, they have seen me sky before was opal blue. Now there's freedom-flocking-flying- flaming-bright-pink-air-to-view. ~*~ What a delightful entrance to what we hope will become your new poet's home. Welcome to Passions! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Life tries to hide in sand and mud, in dirt beneath the lack of waves, but big will filter tiny out to feast until there's no more greed. Awesome...welcome to Passions, looking so forward to reading more of you. Hope you inspire us again with your wisdom very soon. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
welcome! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Go pink flame, your clownish mask hides dignity and Rock and roll."   (smiles) Yay! Rock on! This is a wonderfully vibrant and upbeat debut, dearest friend, now soar to the horizons as you are a bird of paradise! Welcome to Passions, sweet Washington Irving, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Wonderful entrance post you have gifted us with! I look forward to seeing more of your work. Please check your email for a special greeting! Nancy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome lines! Loved the last two verses! Welcome to Passions!  |
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