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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2003-11-20 12:55 PM



Caress the silken skies
Penning    graceful style
Anticipation of your  next  words
Touching the seams     of time



I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel


[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (11-20-2003 12:56 PM).]

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-11-20 12:58 PM


I love this piece you took the challenge to higher levels
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2 posted 2003-11-20 01:13 PM


excellent!
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3 posted 2003-11-20 01:15 PM


Beautiful...he's going to love it!!
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4 posted 2003-11-20 04:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, Ron is just going to love this, sweet friend, you have a golden, giving heart that always bring smiles to everyone's dace, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, Ron is one great storyteller and friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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5 posted 2003-11-20 05:46 PM


Great job... I love it.

~Kelly~

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6 posted 2003-11-20 05:52 PM


Perfect Lauren!
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