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Open Poetry #29

Silk--acrostic challenge

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2003-11-20 12:55 PM

Caress the silken skies
Penning    graceful style
Anticipation of your  next  words
Touching the seams     of time

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (11-20-2003 12:56 PM).]

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-11-20 12:58 PM

I love this piece you took the challenge to higher levels

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-11-20 01:13 PM

excellent!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-11-20 01:15 PM

Beautiful...he's going to love it!!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-11-20 04:58 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, Ron is just going to love this, sweet friend, you have a golden, giving heart that always bring smiles to everyone's dace, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, Ron is one great storyteller and friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!