Heart beats, and Ocean tide ( Acrostic Challenge)

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SEA

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with you

0 posted 2003-11-19 07:02 PM

Journaling her heart, steeped in emotion
Angels dance in delight, moved by devotion
Nestled within words, heart beats and ocean tide
Encompassing a soul of sacred confide
Tender testimonials of adoration undenied

Metamorphosis of metered mesmerize
An ever evolving song of free butterflies
Resonating wistful wisdom, surpassing life time
Incantations, infallibly sublime
Elegantly expressing love, in rhyme

~SEA~

Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2003-11-19 07:11 PM

Perfect and this definately sums up dear Janet so very well! Very well done Sea!

Sunshine

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2 posted 2003-11-19 07:14 PM

Look at you glow...

Marge Tindal

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3 posted 2003-11-19 07:15 PM

SEA~
JUST ABSOLUTELY LOVELY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2003-11-19 07:16 PM

For the life of me I cannot do these. Yours is fabulous and I'm just a wee bit envious!!

Hugs for a sensational write well done.
Marti

“Prayer makes the heart large enough until it can contain God’s gift of Himself.”
Blessed Mother Teresa

Ericc
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5 posted 2003-11-19 07:30 PM

Beautiful!!

Eric

Kaoru

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6 posted 2003-11-19 07:35 PM

Purrrfect.

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7 posted 2003-11-19 07:38 PM

I knew it from the title!

I smile when she smiles, so I'm smiling in advance.

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8 posted 2003-11-19 07:53 PM

priceless, just like our

hugss

Lauren~

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you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

Nightshade

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just out of reach

9 posted 2003-11-19 08:13 PM

Oh, SEA, this is beautiful. hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

Suetang
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10 posted 2003-11-19 09:01 PM

Hello Susan

This was absolutely gorgeous!

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Dee
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11 posted 2003-11-19 09:18 PM

Sea, this is so JM, even with out her name included (yeah I know thats the idea

) I would have picked it as her. I can't wait to see her reaction.

Dee

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Janet Marie
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12 posted 2003-11-19 10:01 PM

Oh girlie...you just made me mothy day...
its been "one of those days" here and this is such a much needed heart-smile.

Thank you seems too little to say for such a sweet sharing of your talent...
I would have loved this even if it wasnt for me...all those GROOVY alliterations and pretty words.

I was just thinking this is the second time you've done an acrostic for me...you spoil me and I thank you so much...

I just love that you tied in the ocean to this...but then you knew that.

Journaling her heart, steeped in emotion
Angels dance in delight, moved by devotion
Nestled within words, heart beats and ocean tide

I'm printing this out on ocean stationary and framing it.

Thank you Susan..this is so sweet and thoughtful.

When I'm with you my eyes are so wide ...
you reached right in my head and turned on the light inside
turned on the light in my mind.

David Gray

Janet Marie
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13 posted 2003-11-19 10:02 PM

silly me....ya got me so mothy I forgot to hit the library button.

got it now.

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Canada eh.

14 posted 2003-11-19 10:37 PM

Very beautiful Susan...
Challenge well met!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

allamericanjoe
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15 posted 2003-11-19 10:53 PM

I love it! What else can I say, you always do such wonderful work! Thank you for another enjoyable read, I think I shall save this one!

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~

SEA

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with you

16 posted 2003-11-19 11:42 PM

hey, just wanted to say thank you all for the kind replies, I swear you guys are the best

and Janet, I am so pleased that you liked this...

[This message has been edited by SEA (11-19-2003 11:43 PM).]

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17 posted 2003-11-20 03:32 AM

just beautiful!

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18 posted 2003-11-20 05:32 AM

Very good and perfect wting SEA....elegantly written too....thanks for your words....

Goldenrose.

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Edder
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19 posted 2003-11-20 08:57 AM

wow! a lesson in how it should be done!

LeeJ
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20 posted 2003-11-20 09:00 AM

I thing you and I feed from the same banquet that nature provides?

Beautifully written, felt every word, and was right there with you...how lovely is the sea...ocean...and all it's knowledge.
Thank you for sharing.

Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2003-11-20 09:06 AM

SEA,
Your write was as pretty as the soft flow of water on the white sand of paradise.

Duncan
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22 posted 2003-11-20 09:13 AM

Morning SEA!! What a cool acrostic for the moth and I see she loved it, of course!!

littlewing
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23 posted 2003-11-20 09:42 AM

Beautiful Susan and to a Lady
well deserving
well met
xxoo

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24 posted 2003-11-20 10:57 AM

sorry so late to respond...but
just wanted to say susan this was
absolutely beautiful. your amazing
talent shines through yet again! such
lovely words for a wonderful woman.
love ya.
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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25 posted 2003-11-20 12:59 PM

well done

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26 posted 2003-11-20 05:09 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, both you and Janet are sooooooo special to us here, as Janet is a moth that always embraces the light and only you can write such a special tribute to a deserving friend! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You Both, dearest friends, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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