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Tell Me |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Tell Me where do wingless birds fly I hear them echoing across the sky and do they feel they are less not more an unrequited wind’s heart in soar where does love go when it sleeps as we press to our soul secrets we keep for if we just utter a single sound we would come unraveled where we are bound maybe it is time to uncurl by just one thread what can survive unspoken now need be said "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Answerless questions abound 'round all of us! VERY well expressed! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I like the way you express it ehre and wish I could tell you, but I'm probably more lost than you.  Crystal |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This is nice Helen, and needs a little bump Ed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am glad that Ed bumped this as I had not had a chance to see it. Helen! This flows in thought and rhyme perfection. Very well done and such deep questions, topped with the perfect ending. enjoyed greatly..... |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
questions that only the heart and soul know the answers to.........thought provoking |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Haunting....I can't imagine such a request, and from such a one as you, going unanswered. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Haunting is right...beautiful. Eric |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
mystically beautiful. Lovely write. Peace, Joe seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Helen, an excellent write from an excellent writer! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh Yes, for what is remembered is worthy to be sung and essential to be spoken and fill the ears of these other birds we are! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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alisa Member
since 2003-08-20
Posts 70Florida |
very nice... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
where does love go when it sleeps as we press to our soul secrets we keep for if we just utter a single sound we would come unraveled Breathtaking... excellent! |
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