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In The Crook Of Rain
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In The Crook Of Rain |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In The Crook Of Rain Puddles consort on the whitewashed sidewalks Falling drops, like pearls in break away from strands A melody sent to soothe the earth, a lullaby Pattering the window frame, tapping…tapping Dimming lights, and blowing flames to snuff These heavy lids, against the white tight necks Of long and longer days A happy sleep, where hushed contradictions Slip beneath the sheets of misty dreams Rocking to sleep the parched and paper flowers Shimmering the wee of hours spent and done Gone and soaked into the pours of thirsty souls Tapping…tapping Soft upon the night lace that fringes gentle breaths Spirits truly, not earthbound but speckled in Their play upon the captivated end of day Copyright Kkh 9/27/03 |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
"A happy sleep, where hushed contradictions Slip beneath the sheets of misty dreams" Can I get this kind of rest over the counter? I enjoyed the write TD Jason |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh Kathleen, I loved the sound, tapping, tapping... Ya know I do~  Hugs~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
spent identity rent coalescing en masse avast then again recycled when announced in lights and loud bass notes |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed this write and read,, terrific,,, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - to walk in the rain, dancing with raindrops is what I see from reading this... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dimming lights, and blowing flames to snuff These heavy lids, against the white tight necks Of long and longer days A happy sleep, where hushed contradictions Slip beneath the sheets of misty dreams Where hushed contradictions slip.... Love this .... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Rainy atmosphere conveyed so beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I truly imagined the rain tapping gently upon the leaves of raspberry bushes and cedars reading this! (big hugggssssss) This is mesmerizing, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD.........from the title on down...a cozy warm and intimate feel. Loved it! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
tapping..tapping.. Love that. Susan |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Oh, the pictures this write brings to mind. Very artfully done, and very much enjoyed! We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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