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Celebration
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Celebration |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Celebration An escape sounds of Aruba, Jamaica, ooo I want to take ya my mind's eye is not here in the now, but there, in a day of future light, where smells and feel, climate and sounds are similar, but different, I am already sensing distinct contrasts of something so vast, it will take several trips back just to acknowledge its reality… then, as if I haven’t worked most of my life, I shall suddenly be shipboard, to set sail and envision myself as, royalty? (Smile.) No, but something close, all the meanwhile, feeling this bubble inside growing on seeds of panoramas previously journaled and televised for my eyes, and I shall see for myself, for the first time, colored vistas film cannot possibly imprison, and I prepare my memory, emptying it of anything that would mar the filming to come. Soon, I shall sink to sift sands between fingertips in explore, while probably pocketing a pebble or two as gifted touchstones to finger upon return, to retain these moments of touching a dream, and perhaps, just perhaps, I shall meet an old friend, one of my mind, alone, to listen to his talking of how it is, there, in the Yucatan, where anything can happen, if you look into the horizon, just long enough. ~*~ Italicized line courtesy of "Kokomo" by the Beach Boys |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Karilea~ Guess I am not the only one... I enjoyed very much.  "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Soon, I shall sink to sift sands between fingertips in explore, while probably pocketing a pebble or two as gifted touchstones to finger upon return, to retain these moments of touching a dream, and perhaps, just perhaps, I shall meet an old friend, one of my mind, alone, to listen to his talking of how it is, there, in the Yucatan, where anything can happen, if you look into the horizon, just long enough." -------------------------------------------- Yes...where anything can happen dear lady!  And..just wanted you to know..I bring back pebbles to hold and remember happenings and the joys of being on a journey. ~Smiling with envy....Sis~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Soon, I shall sink to sift sands between fingertips in explore, while probably pocketing a pebble or two as gifted touchstones to finger upon return, to retain these moments of touching a dream, Mmmm....I wanna go....I wanna go!!!! What a wonderful piece this is - warms me up, yes it does! hugs, Chris  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
somehow I started with Beach Boys and ended with John Lennon *shrugging* nice write lady |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh please can I go? Please, Please, Please!!?? A fabulous write from a lady who deserves this glorious time away. Have a great time!!! Huggles and still begging to come with you!! Marti “Prayer makes the heart large enough until it can contain God’s gift of Himself.” |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enjoyed your celebratory write! Sounds wonderful! Arriba!  Bon voyage!  Linda |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
set the main sail! Rf |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Well, Sissie. Let the mind become full of more marvelous writings to spellbound us with on your return. Have a wonderful time and watch for the green flash when the sun sets...very gentle smile |
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