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joan New Member
since 2003-10-30
Posts 4Estonia |
All the past comes back in a day... she knows it's already to late. Given promises are just too far away and what has staid it's a broken fate. Like dead flowers dead is tomorrow, and like spring showers so deep is her sorrow. Stories without end in her mind a hollow star without skies a faded love withot shine and crystal tears in her eyes. It is so simple to leave to close the feeling and forget but what if there is so much to give more than on the day they met.... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Joan This was such a wonderful piece of writing and I'll look forward to reading more from you. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A beautiful silky flow...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Joan, I don't believe I've welcomed you to Passions. I read this twice, and know the ache. You did a good job with this. Let's see some more from you. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joan~ I'd like to welcome you to Passions~ 'It is so simple to leave to close the feeling and forget but what if there is so much to give more than on the day they met....' Oh, this write knows me too, too well~ But ... it's never, ever 'simple to leave'~ You touched me~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh, how'd I miss this one? I love the format and the theme and the question at the end.... nice write |
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