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Stubborn Heart (Acrostic Challenge)
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Stubborn Heart (Acrostic Challenge) |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
This came from a recent conversation, so I suppose the challenge will be to see if the other person recognizes it.  Slipped and fell to the depths of thee unable to forget-- baffled by your plea broken heart may mend only time will tell really doesn’t matter-- now tolls the wedding bell Help me understand ease this troubled mind allow my soul to mend release the ties that bind then I may love again |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I know how this feels. Beautifully written. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 I don't deserve a friend like you. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Does this mean you're back? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
loner- thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed. Susan- Oh, you don't? Do you have any idea how much I enjoy playing email tag? It gives me something to look forward to in an otherwise mundane day. I should be thanking you for the inspiration, it's been weeks since I've been able to goad Matilda out of hiding!  Lauren- I'm not sure, but I hope so. You know how it is with me...on again, off again.  Dixie- thanks for the read! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed? you always did know how to warm the heart beautiful well met indeed xxoo |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Help me understand ease this troubled mind allow my soul to mend release the ties that bind then I may love again" this is really beautiful  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Edder Good write enjoyed the read. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I needed to come back to save...how come we can't save using edit?? "if you won't let me fall for you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Help me understand ease this troubled mind allow my soul to mend release the ties that bind then I may love again What a beautiful plea... I like this very much! *S* |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Sue- Really? You're a sweetheart! Susan- You're too kind, thank you. Seymour- Thank you, kind sir. Susan-The edit button saves me all the time.  Suthern- I'm so glad you did. Thanks for reading. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nicely done. Susan is a great person |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautiful words written from a beautiful  ~ARH |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a most wonderful heartwarming piece with much sympathy and beauty to it! (big hugggsssssss) I love this, sweet friend, yay, you bring comfort to every one of us, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful , sweet Edder, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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