Open Poetry #29 |
Spanish Girls |
wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
Spanish girls greet the world rolling thru red lips - Bouncing down the street, dancing with their hips. Spanish Girls have passion, and wild raven hair. Eyes that fire bottlerockets off into the air. Spanish Girls know love... they find it everyday, Walking thru the mountains, the Andes bow and sway. SMC |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a beautiful piece. Wonderfully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
they are one of a kind, aren't they? |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Don't know that many Spanish girls......but your poem is really good. I can see them "red lipped and rolling those hips" Thanks! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sensual...James |
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Felinus Junior Member
since 2003-08-06
Posts 20Princeton |
I am a Spanish girl and I take your poem as a compliment. Unfortunately I don;t live in the Andes anymore but in a stuffy uptight town where my wild raven hair is disapproved of. You made me feel good |
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