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Felinus Junior Member
since 2003-08-06
Posts 20Princeton |
I give a piece of me to you Then watch you walk away I'll wait right here for your return Unperturbed by your delay I sit and watch the world go by A girl just sitting in the sun But as the afternoon grows long My mind becomes undone I look around I look for traces Of things I know Or familiar faces I think I recognize my heart Reflected in the glare I see the pieces on the ground And pretend that I don't care |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Beautiful; obviously heart-felt. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Tears :'( |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's hard to do but possible I guess...I have felt this way too |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, show her the poem... it may let in a little light...  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A great write with wonderful imagery, a giving soul that's not receiving, saddened, but in love believing. Great to meet you on PiP, enjoyed you work, thanks for sharing. Sincerely Rick |
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