For weeks, I haven't had a moment of repose...

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Open Poetry #29

For weeks, I haven't had a moment of repose...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-11-19 04:08 PM

For weeks, I haven’t had a moment of repose,
My life is crashing waves and blaring thunder.
Your life is delicately woven prose
And you’re afraid to let it take you under.

For once, you words have failed to convince.
For once, your reasons are as fallible as mine.
I’d like to give myself to you, but since
You won’t accept me, I will give you time.

Forgive me for the careless use of words.
Forgive me for the recklessness of movement
And if I played your song in different chords,
Forgive me for the melody I’ve ruined.

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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-11-19 04:13 PM

"Forgive me for the careless use of words.
Forgive me for the recklessness of movement
And if I played your song in different chords,
Forgive me for the melody I’ve ruined."

Beautiful words asking for forgiveness...
I'm sure if she sees this, all will be well.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-11-19 09:43 PM

Very selfless act! Nice.
Terri~