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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2003-11-17 10:58 PM



The  moon is hungover,
drunk with excess
working overtime,
a mere whisper
in the sun's opening siloloquy,
worn as an overused mantra,
a voyeur of secret affairs,
as fly by night lovers
pine away, parked, beneath its glow,
sneaking in between the
fatfaced clouds, one of the same
in color, almost morphing
until i spot its chalk white signature,
knocked out now, like a younger lover
that thought he could keep up, but didn't,
worn and wanning from poetric catharsis,
used and abused from centuries of bards,
the morning after moon
is a reminder to a 25 year old bohemian poet,
trapped in a mid-aged soccermom's smoking body,
that sometimes we just gotta create
a bit of our own magic, simply to get by.


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-18-2003 10:34 PM).]

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-11-18 12:28 PM


Oh Jesus Michele
I know this Oh yes I do I do
see?  I wasnt suppossed to be here
HERE either
*smile*

beautiful imagery
xxoo

C?
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since 2001-12-29
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2 posted 2003-11-18 05:24 AM


BAH! where did you come from and what is your name?! I love it!
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-11-18 05:44 AM


maybe that is my problem, the moon has been overworked...

a moonchild that wishes it could still work its magic

hugs, M
M

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-11-18 07:37 PM


*poof*
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-11-18 07:40 PM


"sometimes we just gotta create
a bit of our own magic, simply to get by."

How true is this???
I love it Michele!!
Hugs~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
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florida
6 posted 2003-11-18 07:44 PM


And I am a moonchild.....hmmmmmmmmm
Temptress
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7 posted 2003-11-19 01:18 AM


YEP!
This needs to be somewhere near the top so it can be read more. Enjoyed, Lady.

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!


inkedgoddess
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Ohio
8 posted 2003-11-19 03:20 PM


thanks for reading, glad u stopped by
vandana
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9 posted 2003-11-19 04:38 PM


enjoyed
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-11-19 10:58 PM


Nice writing...James
passing shadows
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displaced
11 posted 2003-11-20 02:56 AM


damn, ain't that the truth!

I love this Michele!  You are awesome!

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