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Just you and Me
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Just you and Me |
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iwontdrownagain Junior Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 39Massachusetts |
Here's a sappy love poem for you to read and critique. It is very simple, but it gets to the point. I know it's short, but hey, some of the best poetry is. Just You and Me Just you and me Forever will be Together, Forever. Hold me till the Day breaks and then again All night to Daybreak. Tell my eyes you Need me, want me Love me, Hold me. Say you cannot get Enough of my love Not enough. Tell me more. Come closer to me Whisper in my ear Sweet nothings. Embrace me. Don't use untrue words To serenade my heart No lies. Just love. "The green of your eyes That you get from your father Shows your personality, Such a young girl with an equally Young and foolish heart." ~Lynn M [This message has been edited by iwontdrownagain (11-19-2003 12:56 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it might just be that simple...I remember the days, way back when I was young good write, to the point |
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