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Poetry happens again (with littlewing)
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Poetry happens again (with littlewing) |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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"The Garden" As taken directly from our instant message archive. (We did change one word though) Walk with me into the garden . . . Naked in our innocence innocent in our desire desirous in our longing Sighing an ancient tongue that of the beasts the language of ages unspoken Until the very instant my palm held yours Our eyes held the others locked and paralyzed but moving together A union a meeting of love and art Suspended in time held in a bottle Like whisps of smoke curling Spiraling towards the sky and set adrift Through the tides of time "In looking Northward, I see a light" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I'd say poetry happens when there are poets involved...lol.. in the case of you two..two fine poets.. with hearts that happen to be touching one another.. bound to be good stuff from that. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That was beyond the beyond ~ and then some! I'm left breathless and speechless!  You are magical together! To love eternal!  EA |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
No need to write a duet if you match this closely -- I have a feeling you could sit at a keyboard, one with left hand and the other with right....and come up with a good read. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Beauty drips from every corner of that poem. Exceptionally wonderful. I love this poem. It is true love in its most vulnerable form. I love it. Thank you for this sliver of beauty. Good luck and love always. Member, yv |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yep, schtuff happens, at least between you two! Synchronicity. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Harmony at its finest....beautiful gift... Lauren~ ~~**~~ I had a dream last night That you came to me on silver wings of light I flew away with you in the painted sky And I woke up wondering what was real Is it what we see, touch or feel [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (11-17-2003 11:29 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...perfectly beautiful. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A union a meeting of love and art That describes you well. *S* And we rejoice in your love and appreciate the art you achieve together. *S* |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Inspiring, thats what you two are.  "if you won't let me fall for you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you two speak in poetry  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Very nice. Marvelous synergy and imagery. Pleasant, extremely pleasant read. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love the way ya'll harmonize. And, of course, both of you know that this is just like my Love and I are. We so relate to what's happening with you two. It truly is magical and beautiful. I love ya'll!!  Hugs to both of you Ethel (pssstttt!!! Hey, what was the word that you left out???)  [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-18-2003 01:10 PM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
You two ARE poetry...smile... And this?...is beautiful. Hugging you both... When the power of love overcomes the |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx A touch of the Isle of Wile. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
heh-heh, Cool!  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is lovely you two! corinne |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
awww Ron thank you so much so very sweet and yes lol poetry will happen thank you For your wish there, Linda may it come right back to you a thousandfold thank you *smile* Ed? thank you so much I am quite honored that I am matched with such a fine writer thank you yv? thank you so much your response was so pure, I missed your entrance, I do apologize soooo Welcome to PIP! Hey Kacy . . isnt that uhh The Police? *smile* thank you Thank you Lauren Thank you Nancy aww suthern, no wonder you have the name you do *wink* thank you that was a lovely reply God Susan , Oh My that was . . mad eme smile huge thank you is the goal of every one of us Dixie, My God - another one . . now THAT reply . . is just stunning thank you Hey steven , synergy I like that thank you I missed your entrance too I am sorry Welcome to PIP! ahahah Ethel the only word we had to change was a "this" to a "the" LMAO and thank you for that fine gift floating around in here *smile* LittleOne xxoo Vic Vicky Vicster Vickeeeeeee thank you so so smuch THAT was lovely what you just said? *smile* to you from USHey Sy - Isle of Wile . . c'mon need an explanation here . . Ed? *smile* thank you Sy Thank you icey . . you are always reading us and for that, truly graced Thank you Corinne Ed? thank you for this, seems as if we cant speak any other way anymore *smile* I love you Susie xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
eternal beyond the here and now, and what IS that word changed? cant begin to figure it out |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Bootiful Brother Ed Maree. fate is not just |
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