hevenly folly (acrostic part2)

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Open Poetry #29

hevenly folly (acrostic part2)

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

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0 posted 2003-11-18 12:31 PM

Celetrial beauty from starry heights
answers questions of mudane importance
laughing at wind who
delivers news both dear and sad on breezy fingers
while the world stand still as if waiting
expecting spotaneous creation as
lovely angelic seriphim
listens to sad old men in padded cells

[This message has been edited by Brad Majors (11-19-2003 07:55 AM).]

C?
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since 2001-12-29

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1 posted 2003-11-18 12:33 PM

good style,
I like em short with interesting imagery

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

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2 posted 2003-11-18 12:36 PM

I stand corrected!! LMAO

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

steavenr
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3 posted 2003-11-18 12:36 PM

Nice read. Spiralled my thoughts. Very enjoyable.

Brad Majors

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4 posted 2003-11-18 12:38 PM

glad you enjoyed it!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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New York

5 posted 2003-11-19 03:15 AM

ahahah you are so smart . . .
that Susan . . .
*smiling*

thanks for the challenge
xxoo

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2003-11-19 11:32 AM

I see that you solved YOUR little problem with quite a deft poet's hand m'friend.

Well done.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-11-19 11:39 AM

Ah this is excellent!
And I know it's Susan!!

Hugs~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

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8 posted 2003-11-19 11:45 AM

welll BRAD, somebody's gotta do it, who better then an angel?

A really fine write sir...thank you for sharing.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-11-19 01:50 PM

(smiles) Yay! Oh Brad, Susan is such a wonderful friend and compassionate person just as you are, sweet friend, God Bless You Both, I love this acrostic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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10 posted 2003-11-19 02:36 PM

a perfect acrostic for Susan.

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