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beckers716
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since 2003-11-16
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0 posted 2003-11-19 02:07 AM



you left
your mark on me
like scarlett letter
fed my fevor
momentarly
quenched my thirst
left wanting more
receiveing less
your tourchered heart
tore down the wall
spent my life building
left me exposed
skin too tight
your mark on me
Blotchy
on my naked fleash
your fully clothed
and walking away

Only when all hope seems lost, can you hope to find yourself

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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-11-19 12:04 PM


Powerful.

Eric

beckers716
Junior Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 39
Ohio
2 posted 2003-11-19 11:02 PM


Thank you Eric

Only when all hope seems lost, can you hope to find yourself

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