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beckers716
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since 2003-11-16
Posts 39
Ohio

0 posted 2003-11-19 02:01 AM



Your Name
I call it into the night
Comes back to my ears
Sounding hallow
Empty
For some reason
Unrefined
I can scream it
1000 times
With same result
I never know
If your calling back
Or if it's just
The echos
Of the words I sent out

Only when all hope seems lost, can you hope to find yourself

© Copyright 2003 Becky - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-11-19 10:05 AM


our own words..coming back..or theirs spoken free...
sometimes it is hard to tell.

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279

2 posted 2003-11-19 11:00 AM


Mmm like this idea. Makes one think. Well done!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453

3 posted 2003-11-19 12:39 PM


Very interesting. Enjoyed. I'm looking for more of your work. Unique

SG

beckers716
Junior Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 39
Ohio
4 posted 2003-11-19 11:04 PM


Thank you everyone for taking time to read my poems and posting replys! I'm sure we will get to know each others writing well!
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