Open Poetry #29 |
Echos |
beckers716 Junior Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 39Ohio |
Your Name I call it into the night Comes back to my ears Sounding hallow Empty For some reason Unrefined I can scream it 1000 times With same result I never know If your calling back Or if it's just The echos Of the words I sent out Only when all hope seems lost, can you hope to find yourself |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
our own words..coming back..or theirs spoken free... sometimes it is hard to tell. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Mmm like this idea. Makes one think. Well done! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Very interesting. Enjoyed. I'm looking for more of your work. Unique SG |
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beckers716 Junior Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 39Ohio |
Thank you everyone for taking time to read my poems and posting replys! I'm sure we will get to know each others writing well! |
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